I like the brutality of this game. While not for everyone, it definitely excels in the... uhm... "Dark Erotica" genre. Nice work.
Edit: Just finished shortly after commenting, hold up one minute, I get to look forward to a chapter 2?! Gimme more, take my money (Money pending as I need to save before spending).
Good anti-utopia story, and i personally feel like adding the path of going from defiant to submissive would make sence, because:
1) The way the story is going it looks like a "status quo breaks protagonist" type anti-utopia. Having the judge and his goons put protagonist "back in line with the rest of society" will definetly reinforce that feel.
2) It would give depth to the judge and goons as characters. Right now they feel like rapy assholes for the fun of it, while with this change they would become a keepers of "normalicy" they were set out to be.
3) This would make for interesting inner conflict that can be represented with Spirit stat and Willpower superstat. If the protagonist stays defiant, then she will be sure of her feelings. If the Spirit and Willpower are going down, than the woman starts thinking that the whole rebelion was "a bad idea that was going nowhere from the start".
4) Endings will have more payoff. Getting freedom would feel more deserved after withstanding everything. New ending would have protagonist reluctantly or enthusiastically "accept her place in life" and would give the sence of dread the game is set out to give.
It is just my oppinion and to fulfill it the game will have to be greatly remade, but i felt like sharing my thoughts here.
I absolutely see your point, however female characters becoming submissive is simply not my kink, it turns me off immediately, and when I'm turned off I don't write smut ;)
As for the judge and the goons - they're one-dimentional by design, the whole point of this fantasy is, how do I put this, narrative power subversion? The only multidimensional character is the protagonist, the men here exist only to be cruel assholes for the player's pleasure ;) The victim is the only person the narrative sees as human, the abusers are dehumanized tools. That's just the way I like my porn ;)
Thanks for the comment, it's great to talk about this game :D
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I like the brutality of this game. While not for everyone, it definitely excels in the... uhm... "Dark Erotica" genre. Nice work.
Edit: Just finished shortly after commenting, hold up one minute, I get to look forward to a chapter 2?! Gimme more, take my money (Money pending as I need to save before spending).
This is everything I want out of porn that I NEVER get. Thank you so damn much for sharing it and, if you can, please continue to share it!
Dude I love reading the description,this game deserves a lot more attention... At least for someone who had kinky stuff in their head.
I wish it was possible to bite the cock when he fucks her without a ring gag.
That would be a willpower boost! :D I might add it some day, it fits the narrative ;)
I played it through once and loved it! Now starting a new game to see the other paths.
Thanks!
this is sick and twisted in a good way got my kinks pumping! Loved it!
Thanks! Glad you liked it :D
Dude, the game is excellent. I look forward to continuing
Thanks! The second part is in the works (i.e. I think about finishing it often)!
and size changing content?
Good anti-utopia story, and i personally feel like adding the path of going from defiant to submissive would make sence, because:
1) The way the story is going it looks like a "status quo breaks protagonist" type anti-utopia. Having the judge and his goons put protagonist "back in line with the rest of society" will definetly reinforce that feel.
2) It would give depth to the judge and goons as characters. Right now they feel like rapy assholes for the fun of it, while with this change they would become a keepers of "normalicy" they were set out to be.
3) This would make for interesting inner conflict that can be represented with Spirit stat and Willpower superstat. If the protagonist stays defiant, then she will be sure of her feelings. If the Spirit and Willpower are going down, than the woman starts thinking that the whole rebelion was "a bad idea that was going nowhere from the start".
4) Endings will have more payoff. Getting freedom would feel more deserved after withstanding everything. New ending would have protagonist reluctantly or enthusiastically "accept her place in life" and would give the sence of dread the game is set out to give.
It is just my oppinion and to fulfill it the game will have to be greatly remade, but i felt like sharing my thoughts here.
Thank you for the game.
I absolutely see your point, however female characters becoming submissive is simply not my kink, it turns me off immediately, and when I'm turned off I don't write smut ;)
As for the judge and the goons - they're one-dimentional by design, the whole point of this fantasy is, how do I put this, narrative power subversion? The only multidimensional character is the protagonist, the men here exist only to be cruel assholes for the player's pleasure ;) The victim is the only person the narrative sees as human, the abusers are dehumanized tools. That's just the way I like my porn ;)
Thanks for the comment, it's great to talk about this game :D
No problem.
Do as you like and the game is fun either way.
dont know what to say, but the way things move in story are take ones attention.
you can continue this also, like pretty much the story tells what will happen next
well made!
Thanks! :)